Hazelmoon

[Darcy]

(Sorry, it's short, but I'm pretty busy right now...)
Name: Hazelmoon
Age: 3 years
Sex: Female
Colour of pelt and eyes: Hazelmoon has black fur and green eyes.
Family: Hazelmoon was born to Dawn, female and Dusk, male. She has two sisters, Twilight and Midnight.
History: Hazelmoon was born in a very small den to two wolves. They were both rouges, and did not ever wish to join a pack.
Pack: Hopefully, the Silverpaw one!
Personality: Hazelmoon is very intelligent, but her smalll size makes it obvious that she lacks strength. She is very fast, but lacks in stamina. She does not like wolves pointing out her weaknesses, and she does well under lots of stress.
Special Abilities: Hazelmoon can transform into an elf owl, giving her the abilities of that animal.
Ultimate Dream: Hazelmoon would love to became the Alpha of Silverpaw Pack.

[Darcy]

Approved! - Now to take that place in the pack you have to apply to be a pack member.

[Guest]

Her name seems a bit unusual among the "theme" of her litter: times of days. Did her parents think she was special? Why? And how did two wolves named Dawn and Dusk happen to meet each other? Did they fall in love because they thought that, because of their names, they'd make a cute couple?

"Rouge" is make-up. A "rogue" is a scoundrel or rascal. Do you mean that she was born to a pair of loners?

Having a small size and a lack of strength, as well as her speed and stamina, are not relevant to her personality. She only has three traits so far: her intelligence, doing well under stress, and her obvoius pride when she doesn't want people to point out her flaws. Does she have any more flaws? Is she brave or cowardly -- easily excited or calm and collected? I don't see much personality in this character.